Parade Sentence Rewrite the boring sentence into one that is interesting. Use at least one of the five senses to create imagery with which the reader can identify.
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Sentence: The parade was coming..
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He was at the parade,listening to the band play watching the kids run to catch the candy.
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I could hear Peabody's middle school band coming,and then I knew the parade was near
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I could hear the marching band coming around the corner.
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I could hear the clumping of the horses coming down the road.
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The parade of UCLA intered the K-state entered the staidum.
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I could hear people screaming, and see it coming, but wait do I also smell sweat sweat candy and wait there's more I can feel the vibrations and its here!!!!!!!
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I could hear the bands go waiting for all the cars to go by waiting to throw candy.
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Thare are fier truks that get vary loud.
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You could smell the sweet, sweet candy three miles away and when tootsie rolls start landing at your feet you`d know the parade was there!!!!
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A Tootsie Roll landed at my feet and I knew a parade was on its way... suddenly I saw horses, cars, and candy flying every where.
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The parade is coming and the pull-pork sandwiches smelled so good and I felt the candy in my hand that was on the street.
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I heard the band playing and it got louder and louder.
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I could see the colreful truks and bands coming down the street as the drums blasting sound into my eras and candy fealing like boolets hiting my had that is the tast of gum and smelt like roses.
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I could tell the parade was coming because I could smell the exast from the cars and I could smell the candy.
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when I was in the parade i could smell burnt gas and horse poop.
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The sounds of the parade were distant but in a matter of minutes the candy was flying and the sirens were whaling.
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I could smell the candy that got throwed for kids and parents, I could also hear all the horses clombin when they come along down the rode.
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the parade was comming I was waiting and waiting for the candy to start flying and then the bands and floats started comming and the candy started soaring.
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the parde was coming and a fire truck was coming down road thowing candy.......
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